Friday, May 13, 2011

Birthdays

by Brad


Create a story in which the main character hates birthdays, and tries extremely hard to avoid telling people that today is his special day. And it happens to be the best day of his life. Elaborate to the extreme.



Angus Aristotle Wiggly hated birthdays. If a birthday party was held at his house he would go to the town library and arrange books in the cupboards. Angus was like the Easter Bunny to Christmas. He was furious about parties but no one could know that today was his birthday May 32, 2011.

That morning he walked to school the air was crisp the side walk below his feet was as clean as can be. But every step he took he would glance to both sides making sure nobody would come behind him. Because his little sister Merloneapie was 10 feet behind him and she would not stop talking about his birthday. About 6 minutes later he was at school and walking very cautiously and discreet.

School was fun for him only 6 people attended class because all of the other students wre at his surprise party.

When he got home it was 6 o'clock p.m because he was taking some extra-curricular classes. Right when he stepped in the door before he could say "Mom I'm home" he heard SUPRISE! It turned out to be the most extraordinary party ever in his life. And that was Angus Aristotle Wiggly's birthday experience.

 Write a story about throwing a birthday party for someone. Whether it be for a family member or a significant other. How did it go? Did the person enjoy him or herself?

Today was Edistickle Frogdumb's  birthday today and I want to throw her a party. She is turning 15 years old. All day at school I didn't talk to her. She was getting very pist. At the end of school I approached her in a hallway and asked her if she wanted to go to Vietnam with me and on the way I would purchase anything she wanted.

She loved a whole week in Vietnam can really change a person on the way home she spoke Vietnamese. She told everyone her brother, sister, grandma, grandpa, mom, dad everyone.

 What is the best present that you've ever gotten for your birthday? Not necessarily the most expensive, but the one that was the most important to you. Talk about it and try to remember where that present is today.

The best present I have ever received was a pair of shoes. This was my favorite most treasured gift because at the time I had no shoes. Well I did but they were thrashed. Holes, bite marks, pee stains, mouse holes everything  just horrible. I also loved them because that was the first gift I ever got to pick myself. Those $55 pair of shoes are now on my shoe shelves waiting to be thrown away. I loved those shoes.

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