By Sean
If I where to make a TV show for teens I would have an animated comedy series. I would call it My Life. It will be about four teens you have an internet comedy site where they post videos, pictures, and jokes. The kid's names will be Seth, Helen, Tom, and Alicia.
In a regular episode the four friends will get into trouble trying to get the funniest video. That is my new TV show.
By Amandeep
My idea for a new show would be a comedy. It would be a comedy because there are not that many shows that have comedy in them. It has a cartoon called Giry it would show you not to take drugs and to be healthy. Giry would have a pet named Steve. Giry would have a stupid friend like him named Pat ninja star. Giry would work at the supreme sponge. When the taco sign comes he turns in to taco man and stops teens from taking drugs and smoking. This would be my TV show and maybe teen would like this show I know I would.
By Juliann
Dear President of the TV network,
I have a knew idea for a teen show, the name is Island Time. It is supposed to be filmed on Oahu, Hawaii.
It will be hopefully appealing to teenagers. First of all it is filmed on an island, because the title Sais," Island Time" and it is really beautiful there. It will be a hit. It is comedy, and thriller. There are cops in it. Well one isn't a cop, one is a Navy Seal, but is the boss, of the force. Those are the people that make it funny.
There is Alex who is the Seal, who was born in Hawaii, Scott who just moved to Hawaii from New Jersey to see his daughter (he is divorced, the x-wife moved in with her husband), Grace who was born in Hawaii, and loves to surf, and Daniel who was also born on Hawaii, and is in a bit of trouble with the H.P.D. which stands for Honolulu Police Department. They accused him of stealing 20,000 dollars. Which he didn't.
They solve a variety of crimes. Teenagers will love it, it is funny, and it is a really good thriller.
I hope you think about my ideas and hope you like it, and I hope the teenagers like it to.
by Dylan
One day their was a girl with her friends at a poop factory. They were studying how cow poop was able to make fertilizer. They were having lunch when she saw a big huge 10 foot tall pile of cow poop. She thought maybe just maybe I could get an A if I could get more details on this. So she started climbing it until she got to the top. Then she got all of the information she needed to get an A but then she fell into it. She fell 7 feet into the pile. Everyone started laughing and calling her names.
When she went to school the next day she was happy to hear she got an A but not to hear people calling her PoopFace. Whenever she walked by someone all she heard was "PoopFace PoopFace" then just lots of people laughing.
That name was over in about a week. But before you new it the name was back. But this time she was playing soccer and she was the goalie. Someone kicked the ball into the goal but when she dove their was a huge pile of dog poop. And she face planted right into it. And yet again the next day at school all she heard was "PoopFace PoopFace" and more laughing.
But this time the name stuck it never went away. And she was mad. In fact she was so mad she got in lots of fights and also in lots and lots of trouble. So one day she decided she couldn't take it any more. So she told her mom she wanted to change her name to PoopFace Johnson. "Are you sure you want to do this" said her mom. "Yes I'm sure."
So the next day they went and changed it to that. She did because if people are mean and want to call her that then why not it be her name. So from that day on her name was officially PoopFace Johnson.
By Aaron
Jody, Cody, Mac, and Jenney were all friends. Since day one they would talk like babies in the stroller then they played tag and hide and go seek in the backyard. Now there in high school solving problems. they were all in class 11th grade, listing to their teacher. "Ok class take out your language arts book." Linus a girl in the class read the words "One day Lisa was walking home from school, then these two bullies made fun of her name and calling her other names like frog legs and hammer face and a lot more stuff." Then Vince a guy in the class read the words "Lisa ran home and went to her house and cried on her bed. her parents heard the fuss and checked on her to see if she was all right." Then Cody read " The parents opened the door and asked if she was all right. Then Lisa said NO! I hate my school. I have been asking you and asking you if you could change my name and look how far its gotten." Then the school bell rang to go home DINGGG. Mac, Jody, Cody and Jenney packed their stuff. while the class was walking out of the room the teacher yelled " Don't forget to study for the big test on Tuesday!!!" The four friends were walking home together and talking a bout the name changing thing. Mac was saying " man I wonder where you have to go to get your name changed?" Jenny said " Yeah but is that even possible?" "What's even possible?" said Cody admiring the girl Jessica who sits by him in class. Jody said " Uh Cody are you ok?" Cody snapped out of it and shook his head and replied " Oh yeah I'm fine." they all separated and said "bye." to each other to go home. The next day the four friends regrouped and went to school they were still talking about the name changing and what the rest of the story would be like. they went to class and sat in their seats. the teacher reminded the class to study and do the math page 180. 30 minutes later the four friends were done and sat together and read ahead of the book with out the class. Jody read "Lisa's mom said " Ok your right we're going to change your name but its not going to make any difference." Then Lisa said "Oh yes it will". Jenny took the rest of the paragraph and read " Lisa and her parents went to the court house and signed some papers. She came in as Lisa but she came out as Bell. Cody read the last words " And Lisa I mean Bell never had trouble ever again.
THE END
By Aman
Nacho is a kid he lives in Creeperville, now Creeperville is a place that has no living thing except people and animals. That's it but the next city is 1,252,564,554,535,545,448,245,459 miles just to one city. When he was a little kid he set out on a journey to change his name and he was just ten years old. He got some friends along the way because the were farms there one of his friends were Moly. He stayed at her house more a couple days. This is were the story takes of f, the next day Nacho would leave and then Moly came in his room Moly said ''I want come with you '' Nacho refused to let her and then she said ''ok''. The next day Nacho left and at the age of thirty two he finally made and then changed his name to Steve. But he didn't know that Moly was following him and they became friend and they got married two years latter and they were broke. Then one day on the sidewalk the found a hundred dollar bill and they lived happily ever after until the baby came.
by Alondra
There was a girl who lived in New York. She would always get tease by her name. But until one day she decides to change her name. Then she told her mom and the girl's name was dookie. She was called that name because she stepped on a piece of dog poop and they made fun of her. So she didn't like her name. Then dookie's mom said "are you sure that you want to change your name". Dookie said "yes I'm sure".
Three weeks past dookie went to school and still didn't change her name. So dookie went to school everybody was teasing her. Then she called her mom to put her put. So she does and she said "why do you want to come home"? Dookie said "because I can't support it them teasing me"! Dookie's mom said "let's go to change your name then"!
The next day they went to change dookie's name. Then dookie's mom said "dookie what name do you want"? Dookie said "I want my name to be Ana". "Okay "said Ana's mom.
Then she went to school the kids said "hey dookie". Ana said "it's not dookie no more". The kids said "then what is the name". Ana said "it's Ana so ha you guys won't tease me no more".
Then maybe a year past. So doo- I mean Ana was no more tease by the kids in her school ever again. Then she just lived in a normal live just like everybody else. Ana learn that when she haves kids that she would never name her children like she was name.
By Joan
Once there was a boy named Jacky Paterson he wanted to change his name because the other boys will bully him for his girl name. Then came the day when he changed his name for ever! When he went to go change his name he was thinking what to change it then he said ok its time to change my name. When they asked him what he wanted it to be he said "Dandy Paterson?" He didn't put it as jack because they will still know it was him.
Then the next day when he went to school no one know him every one was nice to him. Then he was scared when the teacher was taking roll call what if they know who he was every one know his last name. Then the teacher said "Dandy Paterson" he almost had a heart attack but no one said noting he was so happy that no one said noting. Then in lunch when he sat with the bully he said "you're last name is like an old kid his name was Jacky Paterson but you're dandy Paterson." He was so scared but he said "that is a weird name for a guy Jacky." He laugh he didn't won't anyone to know it was him but he just go with the flow. The next day he went to his friends house
By Gisel
My name is Alex Guadarino I live in the streets of Los Angeles but what I call the streets of hell. I don't even know how I got here, one minute I was in Long Beach with my parent watching them fight while petting my pet buns next thing you know I'm homeless in Los Angeles. Its 2011 and knowing that no one cares about me. I've been living here since I was ten because in my heart I couldn't deal with my parents fighting. My mom is drunk and my dad is an abuser (hits my mom). They also got a divorce and my mom remarried to a "Rich Doctor" that supposedly was going to help us move on but really he just made things worse. From the first time he met my family he didn't like my dad and started hitting on my mom.
It all happened when I was eleven. It all corrupted my mind. All of it messed me up that's why decided to run away.
"Alex come over here" Alex's mom Katrina called in scratchy voice. Alex thought in his mind of course she's drunk. Alex walked over to his moms room slowly tip toeing. "Yes mom what's wrong" Alex said in a loud voice. "Don't you have baseball practice" Katrina said to Alex. "Yeah but I'm not going" Alex replied, "Why aren't you going Alex" Alex's mom expressed. "Mom look at yourself your drunk, I don't want to leave you like this, what if you burn the house down" Alex cried. "I'm not drunk I'm o o o ok" she said in an intoxicated voice. "Oh shut up" he said almost screaming at her. "Don't yell at me, I'm your mother and your suppose to respect me" she said sobbing. "I don't have respect for you because you're a stupid drunk idiot" he said shouting in his loudest voice. Alex went to his room and slammed the door shut. Katrina started crying and then suddenly we heard a slam Booch. Oh no dads here Brian said in his mind. "Honey I'm home... honey" dad said. "I'm over here Dad" Alex said quietly, "Is she drunk again because if she is you know the consequences'…. Alex" he said in a scary deep voice. Alex saw his dad take off his belt slowly with his scratchy hands. POW…POW…POW… That's the only thing you heard was the belt slapping Alex's back. Then suddenly you heard TPUand all you saw was poor Alex on the floor with blood coming out Alex's nose and lip. The next day Alex went to school late and the secretary asked him about his face and he said he fell down the stairs of his house. Alex stretched the truth because he had actually fallen down the stairs but his dad pushed him.
I ran away after that after school I didn't know what I was doing. Now I'm living in the streets. Everyday gets worse and worse just waiting for someone to save me from this tragedy. I'm Alex and I'm waiting for them to stop fighting for their fault I'm here I just wanting to die already.
by Juliann
A girl in Russia has a husband, and a child. They all loved each other. But the wife decided to get a divorce. He was a horrible husband; she had fallen out of love with him.
She moved to Oahu, Hawaii, when the little girl was just a little baby. There she remarried, to a retired Navy Seal. He was young, but he had to retire, because of an accident that happened in Korea. She changed her name to Kona McGarrett. Just so that the x-husband couldn't find her.
Then one morning the husband Steve McGarrett went for a little walk, because Kona and Steve had a little fight. So he thought he should take a walk, around the block. While inside the house, went on a fight. Macy McGarrett hid under the couch. Then there in the house stood Kona's x-husband. They were talking in Russian so Macy couldn't understand anything they were saying. Then Macy's mother hit the flour, with blood all over her. Dead! Macy was ok, he didn't find her. When Steve came back, he saw her on the ground. He found the murder weapon, a packet knife. He had it in his hands when the police arrived.
He started to run. He made it to Pearl Harbor. He jumped the fence. Then he got on the Missouri. There were all these passengers looking around. Now he has plenty of hostages. He called out to the police, and the SWAT," I will let everybody go, but only if you find my wives killer. " and of course nobody believed him, because he was the one running, with the murder weapon.
But later on the 5-0 Task Force, found him, and Macy. He kidnapped Macy. He put her on a plane back to Russia, with him. But 5-0 stopped him, he is now in jail, for hurting their family.
By Sean
On May 1 2012 Big Time Loser. Yes his first name is Big. His middle name is Time and his last name is Loser but in this is a story of love and happiness. Twenty-one years later in 2033 Mr. Loser decides to change his name but before he does he meets a girl. Her name is Candice. And Mr. Loser falls in love with Candice and in the end he decides not to change his name.
By Will
This is about a guy who hated his name. His name was Sew Fu and his sister's name was Sally Fu. He hated his name because people thought he was a lawyer. He blamed his mother for naming him that. He ran away in to the woods trying to think of a new name. His sister nicknamed him Dead Meat.
When he was in the woods he thought of lots of names. But for some reason he couldn't choose one. He sat there and thought but nothing he wanted. He thought of all sorts of names. Then he new that he couldn't legally change his name until he was twenty. He went home and lived his life until he was twenty.
He was finally twenty and he went the person help him change his name. He read a choice of names and he chose Kung. His legal name was Kung Fu. He was perfect he had a great name. Know when he walks down the street and he says his name they think he is a Kung Fu master.
His sister didn't want to change her name because she liked her name. She loved her name so much that she called herself Sally Fu. She met her true husband she loved him and got married. Kung Fu also got married to a girl named Marry Fu. Sally Fu married Kick Butt.
There parents died of old age. They died at the age of eighty. There names were Sensei Fu and Mien Fu. They loved there kids and there pets. They great parents to there kid.
