By Juliann
Dear President of the TV network,
I have a knew idea for a teen show, the name is Island Time. It is supposed to be filmed on Oahu, Hawaii.
It will be hopefully appealing to teenagers. First of all it is filmed on an island, because the title Sais," Island Time" and it is really beautiful there. It will be a hit. It is comedy, and thriller. There are cops in it. Well one isn't a cop, one is a Navy Seal, but is the boss, of the force. Those are the people that make it funny.
There is Alex who is the Seal, who was born in Hawaii, Scott who just moved to Hawaii from New Jersey to see his daughter (he is divorced, the x-wife moved in with her husband), Grace who was born in Hawaii, and loves to surf, and Daniel who was also born on Hawaii, and is in a bit of trouble with the H.P.D. which stands for Honolulu Police Department. They accused him of stealing 20,000 dollars. Which he didn't.
They solve a variety of crimes. Teenagers will love it, it is funny, and it is a really good thriller.
I hope you think about my ideas and hope you like it, and I hope the teenagers like it to.